Tuesday, November 16, 2010

Jus go with the flow......

Rythms of the heart
when falls apart
pains to the core
when life is completely tore....

Feelings are never less
when our lives are in full distress
heart tries hard to confess
but mind never lets it express....

Holding on the feelings
when I look through the ceilings
Reminds us of the past
which gives you the future forecast.......

Its never late to start over
when the desires have made a strong cover
Being determined at heart forever
Life puts on a crimson clover.......

                                  By Aradhana Sabat

5 comments:

Baby Elu said...

Khushi... I feel like this one is written especially for me...

U r such a motivational shayar.... keep up the good work.... ;)

Arun K said...

I love the ending !! lots of mixed emotions - very very nice Quatrain... very good usage of power words which makes u so much different from others ... Super like ;)

rathasima said...

good keep it up....

Ayush said...

Nice =0
Surprise package only u r!!

Sumit Kumar said...

True, you have the last para. start afresh and you will find your life back.